May 9

Staircase to the sky

I went to the beach the amazing thing of all time apered concrete stairs. Suddenly flowers appeared. It was fantabulous. The sky looked like cotton candy. A dove stood in front of it was looking out deep blue sea I looked a flock of seagulls landed on the stairs they looked at me at If this was the future quite gladly. They weren’t begging for food at all. It was really peaceful here and I liked It.


Posted May 9, 2016 by ayl0001 in category Uncategorized

1 thoughts on “Staircase to the sky

  1. 09356511

    Hi Jack,

    Good use of descriptive language. Be careful of full stops and capital letters – there is a few missing!

    Miss Wheeler

    Reply

Leave a Comment

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

*