May
9
Staircase to the sky
I went to the beach the amazing thing of all time apered concrete stairs. Suddenly flowers appeared. It was fantabulous. The sky looked like cotton candy. A dove stood in front of it was looking out deep blue sea I looked a flock of seagulls landed on the stairs they looked at me at If this was the future quite gladly. They weren’t begging for food at all. It was really peaceful here and I liked It.
Hi Jack,
Good use of descriptive language. Be careful of full stops and capital letters – there is a few missing!
Miss Wheeler